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The Suggestion...

By: crazymerlinman321 on 13 Apr 2010
Rating: 5.00 in 5 votes
Status: rate | *In Roadmap*
mr4 | enemies | [Suggestion_6572]

Spintop

Description:It is orange-brownish and it has red eyes.He is a top.In the middle u see his eyes and on top of him and under him are tops so he can spin.
Size:medium
Weapon:short range- he spins at u long range- he spins to make a tornado.
Spawn:A pyramid
Alliance:Haven't yet decided
Image:
Roadmapped by , crazymerlinman321



Comments

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13 Jul 2010 [comment_36190]
NEW! Darren
Ah, meep. It's fun when things like this last long enough to have obscure backstory XD


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36194]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
XD


Even Gnorthan remembers that!


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36209]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
What is FSM? Fix Spelling...?


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36216]
NEW! Super_merlin
His Greatness, the all-might Flying Spaghetti Monster of course!!

May he touch you with his noodley appendages!


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36231]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
What is the religon called? Pastafarian?


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36233]
NEW! Super_merlin
FMSisem, Pastafarianism, Whatever.

Please know it's not serious.


May you all have a deliosious noodlely experience with him.


Ramen.


13 Jul 2010 [comment_36237]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I heard Ramen tastes good.


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36240]
NEW! Hi_BEZGOUBOV
oh srry guys i thought beep was ok i normally say tht while others actually say the real swear words which i hate. :(

and i did not u meep in both i used beep or i missed typed it.
so i the future i just use food right.
did i miss spell anything??
no text language ok.
and i am bad at spelling always have been in a languages. (i think i spelt tht wrong)

Is there like a newbie forum on this site some where?


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36242]
NEW! megaman4ever
Well, *beep* or something also will do if you just have to show us that you would curse.

As for misspelling, it's not that big of a deal, but proper grammar would be appreciated(especially on the part of big-small letters and not writing in caps). Of course, you are free to do what ever you want to with what you write, but if you deliberately use bad language or something alot, people probably will have negative feelings towards you.

Since you know crazymerlinman123, you can just ask him if something is really unclear.

There are no real rules, except -
Don't write offensively. In addition to cursing, that includes harassing ANYONE. If you make someone feel bad, I hope you feel sorry for it.
Don't post copyrighted stuff. We can't have characters from other games in the games, and besides, it's more fun to make your own enemies and stuff rather than copy from somewhere.

Nah, there's no real 'newbie' section. We're a friendly lot. Make suggestions, chat, post comments about other's suggestions.... Do as you like, pretty much. There are, however, only around a dozen of active members, so we are a quite tight-knit community. I hope you will have fun!


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36245]
NEW!
With regards to "and i did not u meep in both i used beep or i missed typed it.
so i the future i just use food right."
It was indeed beep, at least in the one that I approved; I think Super_merlin approved the other one. It just felt quite appropriate to change it to meep(for inside jokes)

and if you use food, make sure to add [] around it. Of course, it need not be food, just an unexpected word;)

For the grammar/improper spellings, it rather helps to reread your posts before hitting submit, you'll catch various words that are either missing or don't sound right.


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36279]
NEW! Super_merlin
I did approve that first one.

Also know that if the grammar or spelling annoys me, I will correct it.


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36324]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
What if the grammar doesn't annoy you but it is wrong. Will you still correct it? No?


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36339]
NEW! megaman4ever
Obviously not.


14 Jul 2010 [comment_36351]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I correct it anyways. Well I guess my suggestion is taking a turn into the spam world.


18 Jul 2010 [comment_36465]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Well I tried really hard to make it spin. It is quite difficult for me. I made another spin but I don't really know if it is good or not. If it is not good, please tell me how to improve.


19 Jul 2010 [comment_36478]
NEW! Super_merlin
Oh. I like that. A lot!


19 Jul 2010 [comment_36481]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Thank you. I tried to make it very smooth.


significantly better.


19 Jul 2010 [comment_36498]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Thank you Gnorthan.


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36551]
NEW! megaman4ever
*GlADoS voice*Very, very well done!


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36560]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
GIADoS Voice? What is that?
Anyways, the only thing that I dislike is that, it is not much of an enemy now. I mean it is just boring ol' spinning top now. I understand that the eye looked weird but could we change it a little?


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36570]
NEW! Hobbes
Play Portal then the "GlADoS voice" thing will make sense... The cake is a lie!


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36571]
NEW! Super_merlin
Please note that any appearance of danger is merely a device to enhance your testing experience.


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36577]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
The cake is a lie! One of those memes right?


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36578]
NEW! Hobbes
Crazy: Sorta, mostly just a Portal joke that became quite popular.

"The Enrichment Center reminds you that the Weighted Companion Cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak."


23 Jul 2010 [comment_36579]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Oh ok.


24 Jul 2010 [comment_36580]
NEW! megaman4ever
I especially liked the pre-boss-battle thing with the object that dropped - "Do you like that thing so much? Well, marry it then."

And yeah, what Immortal said.


24 Jul 2010 [comment_36583]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
John: Don't you love the Iphone?
Stewart: Ya!
John: WELL MARRY IT!!!!!!!!
Stewart: No!
John: I thought you said that you loved it.
Stewart: ...



25 Jul 2010 [comment_36601]
NEW!
I could see that being Jon Stewart talking to himself...


26 Jul 2010 [comment_36608]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I just like to use celebrities' first names and last names in dialogues.


26 Jul 2010 [comment_36613]
NEW! megaman4ever
...You removed the eye?
Next is the attack anim I guess.


26 Jul 2010 [comment_36622]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Yep.


2 Aug 2010 [comment_36708]
NEW! steve
I can't wait to play Portal. Steam is coming to Linux yay!


2 Aug 2010 [comment_36711]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
What is steam?


2 Aug 2010 [comment_36716]
NEW! Hobbes
Steve: Do you happen to know when?


2 Aug 2010 [comment_36718]
NEW! megaman4ever
Whoah! That's a great piece of news!


3 Aug 2010 [comment_36736]
NEW! Darren
Steam's software that lets you play certain computer games (ie ones made to run on steam, such as...portal). There's quite a lot for it.


3 Aug 2010 [comment_36744]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Oh...cool.


3 Aug 2010 [comment_36745]
NEW! megaman4ever
Surely you have heard of Portal, Half Life or Counter-Strike?? They are all developed for Steam.

In fact, I noticed that the PlayOnLinux actually lets you install any commercial Windows game which has been actually cofirmed to work. No more guessing about it! Yeah, and the fact you can just install it right there is nice - just choose a Windows application and press install, if you have the concience to do it, but then again, illegal downloads ARE very popular...


3 Aug 2010 [comment_36762]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Ya I have heard about counter-strike.


3 Aug 2010 [comment_36768]
NEW! Super_merlin
Play on Windows and stuff will never be 100% compatible as long as Microsoft is Microsoft. The Windows and DirectX APIs are just to big.

@Steve

Is that official? There's been a linux refrence in the Mac launcher for a while now.


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36792]
NEW! megaman4ever
Yeah, I know that, but apparently, at least, it runs many of my favourite windows programs, and many of the rest are ported on linux already.


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36797]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
And your favorite programs on Windows are...?


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36818]
NEW! megaman4ever
Pretty much some freeware games, but also some working tools(like, some for programming, there also are some randomer stuff like... Well, many editors for different stuff, like, say, savefile editors, or, rom data editors, or, even a UAF dungeon editor/game(which is a damn good application for the rare ADnD fans!), or... You get the idea.

But mostly games.


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36819]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
ADnD? What is that?


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36821]
NEW! megaman4ever
Advanced Dungeons and Dragons.


4 Aug 2010 [comment_36843]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Oh I thought it was Awesome Dungeons and Dragons or something. XD.
Wasn't there that other one... DnDo or something?


5 Aug 2010 [comment_36847]
NEW! megaman4ever
Yes, but it's not a 'real' official DnD game, though.

It is partially licenced by Wizards, though.

You probably have heard of Wizards of the Coast? The company which has made all these great role-playing- and cardgames? For example, DnD, Warhammer, Pokemon TCG, Magic the Gathering...... And so on.


5 Aug 2010 [comment_36849]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Oh ya. I have played Pokemon TGC.


18 Sep 2010 [comment_37657]
NEW! crazymerlinman321


18 Sep 2010 [comment_37665]
NEW! megaman4ever
Animate it? Make the circles on top move and the lines in the middle look like it's rotating?

Nice, nice work indeed...


18 Sep 2010 [comment_37674]
NEW!
Hint: Your middle frame will be that one mirrored.


18 Sep 2010 [comment_37689]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I was aware of animating it.
The problem is that I thought it was going to be easy. I thought all I had to do is move the silver and dark grey lines around. It turns out, I have to move the whole tornado!
This is going to take a while.


18 Sep 2010 [comment_37705]
NEW!
I'm thinking that there will be a lot of frames, with the tornado slowly moving back and forth, but with little lines moving around it quickly. Also, I'm guessing that the transition between the stand anim but a bunch faster, with some circular lines appearing around the sides(showing faster motion), while it starts to kick up dust. The dust eventually covers it, becoming the tornado.


20 Sep 2010 [comment_37837]
NEW! steve
It will be tricky to do well, you'll need to make the curves at the sides move upwards, if you rotate a screw you see what I mean.


21 Sep 2010 [comment_37885]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I think I will just make the lines inside the tornado move around the tornado. Then I make the curves of the tornado change sides. I will also add little pieces of sand around to add special effects. :)


21 Sep 2010 [comment_37902]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I have made two tornadoes. You will probably dislike them as they are my first drafts. One is slow and one is fast.



21 Sep 2010 [comment_37920]
NEW! Roxblaster
...Hmm...Not bad, but they sort of look like they're dancing. I would suggest doing what note suggested- that mirror image should be your middle frame. The reason is because the entire tornado should be shifting- it looks like the top and the bottom are cemented in place (hence why it seems to be dancing).

Still, you're on the right track. The speed lines are effective.


21 Sep 2010 [comment_37930]
NEW!
It might help to look up some vids of tornadoes and get a complete mental image of exactly what a tornado looks like and is doing as it moves, then simplify/cartoonify/pixelate it.


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37950]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
So I keep that. I then do the same thing but the other way around right? I also move the top. Could you please tell me how I can make it look like the top is moving without it looking weird?


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37969]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
I sort of fixed the top.


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37978]
NEW! megaman4ever
Still the bottom. Hint, move the whole image.

And, you know, I got 200th comment=D


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37985]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
W00T!


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37994]
NEW! AirmanRocks
Im not an expert at this but the things at the top are just staying still, is this normal?


22 Sep 2010 [comment_37999]
NEW! megaman4ever
Not really, perceptive.

They need to move as well, but I didn't see it.. I doubt it's very clear against a background.


22 Sep 2010 [comment_38011]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Ok...two things to do.
Make top move.
Make bottom move.


22 Sep 2010 [comment_38026]
NEW! megaman4ever
Also, near the bottom, on the right side, it looks bad in a few frames where the tornado has a sharp spot as 'leftovers' from the last frame. You'll spot it.


22 Sep 2010 [comment_38028]
NEW!
My start:
Tornado_1

procrastination ftw.
If I find some time tmw, I'll finish it off.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38030]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Ok...that is way more awesome than mine. I will add the green bits for you Note.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38040]
NEW! megaman4ever
I think the sand should be another image and be programmed - spawn random pieces of sand to random spots which move a little and are then destroyed.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38041]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Ok. I'll put the sand in another image.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38047]
NEW! Darren
That's good, note!
Only thing I'd say is that the circling bit at the top looks a bit odd.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38051]
NEW!
that's because I was lazy, and didn't draw the top spinning at the same rate as the rest of it. I'm going to change it.


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38057]
NEW! Roxblaster
Well, in reality, winds in a tornado are often spinning at very different speeds- all extremely fast, of course.

But the top does look a little weird. Other than that, great!


23 Sep 2010 [comment_38070]
NEW! Hobbes
I think part of what looks weird at the top is because of the jerk at the end of the loop.


24 Sep 2010 [comment_38108]
NEW! AirmanRocks
now i see it...


24 Sep 2010 [comment_38122]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
See what? The jerk?


25 Sep 2010 [comment_38181]
NEW!
rev. 2

tornado_2

♪ ninja edit: ninja'd


25 Sep 2010 [comment_38193]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Ok...that will definetly be the official tornado for Spintop. It is AWESOME!


25 Sep 2010 [comment_38200]
NEW! megaman4ever
I think the bottom and middle should spin at the same direction, instead of crossing like that. But I might be wrong.

It's better though.


25 Sep 2010 [comment_38214]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
They should be spinning in different directons or else it will spin like a normal top. This tornado is more of a cartoon tornado with twists and bends. Most tornadoes I see look straight. Not completly straight though.


25 Sep 2010 [comment_38222]
NEW! AirmanRocks
Yes, you are right crazy... at least i think so!


26 Sep 2010 [comment_38241]
NEW! Darren
I think the spinning and the dust etc is all awesome, but the circle at the stop still seems odd. Too...regular, not chaotic.


26 Sep 2010 [comment_38243]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
It looks a bit weird but it should work.


26 Sep 2010 [comment_38277]
NEW!
When its like that, however it helps a bit to prevent the eye from thinking that the tornado is just doing a half-circle, waving back and forth.

That said, the bits from the white-ish lines could be popping out of the top.


4 Dec 2010 [comment_40498]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Oh. I have to do the reel...without the eye. :(


5 Dec 2010 [comment_40512]
NEW!
Hey!
Its crazy!


5 Dec 2010 [comment_40513]
NEW!
...I'm starting to get really lazy with my contractions:P


6 Dec 2010 [comment_40524]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Lol, I have been a little busy with school, projects and exams. I actually had my drama exam today. I don't think I did too well but my parents don't really care about drama...


7 Dec 2010 [comment_40541]
NEW! Phoenix
I love this guy! The tornado is great Note!


7 Dec 2010 [comment_40555]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Thanks! Yeah, Note did an excellent job with the tornado.


29 May 2011 [comment_41872]
NEW!
I suppose more work in this area will be beneficial.


3 Jun 2011 [comment_41886]
NEW! crazymerlinman321
Indeed it will, I have yet to make the grave.


25 Aug 2013 [comment_43868]
NEW!
I just realized what's missing on the tornado anim!

It needs two more frames to look like it's spinning! Aka, it needs to slow down when its close to sideways!


25 Aug 2013 [comment_43871]
NEW! megaman4ever
Oh, right, that makes sense.. Lol.

By the way, I kind of forgot what the attack's like. Close up, touching it will deal damage, and.. Further away, it'll blow tornadoes at you? Will there be something special related to it being a tornado, or will it just deal damage and disappear?


26 Aug 2013 [comment_43873]
NEW!
I thought it becomes the tornado for a little while for melee damage.



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